Review for Forbidden Desires

Forbidden Desires

(#) ReddyDevil 2012-07-18

Update on Saturday? This just gets better and better! :)

I really loved how Ryan came and lay next to her on the bed; that was just really sweet. When the burgular alarm went off, I thought it was either Derek or one of his friends or something! And then it was Allison! -.- The bitch. I'm interested to see how you get her out of the picture, but I'm kinda worried that she's gonna blab about what Kassidy accidentally said about not going to bed without Ryan... 0.0 Whatever happens, I'm sure drama will ensure.

Looking forward to Saturday! :D

Author's response

I was thinking that I should probably update more often... Or try! Hope you enjoy the update! Thank you so much for keeping up with the story, once again it's really nice to have feedback!

:P I liked writing that part. O.o It was tempting! ... But just little annoying Allison! There will definitely be drama. The chapter that's not posted pretty much leads in to the drama. From here on out it'll be pretty dramatic. :D That's all I can say without giving everything away.

Thanks so much! Hope you enjoy the update!