Review for All Bets Are Off
(#) snake56tongue 2012-07-21 01:21:21 AM
Okay, so you don't understand how much I love William.... I love him... like, a lot.... so the fact that you've written him with Mikey.... GAH.
This is perfect, doll. Really :D I love how you made Pete cupid, and the phone call with Gerard was priceless!
And then how William gives him all the money back in the end, and Pete is so concerned about his ego yet at the same time Mikey, and woah.
I also really like this style... don't get me wrong, I like your usual writing style as well, it's just... I think you write better as someone observing the pairing, y'know what I mean?
Amazing job! :D
I love William too. Maybe even more than I love Cadbury's Creme Eggs, and that's saying something.
Thank you very much! Glad you liked the phone call; I was a little worried that it would seem out of place.
I'm relieved you liked the style, it is different from how I normally write but I also found it to be easier/funner to write like this.
Thanks for such a lovely review! :D
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