Maannn, I didn't know there was G-Force fanfics! I loved G-Force when I was a kid, and have been constantly lamenting it's lack on normal TV for the last, lo this last decade now.
This made me laugh so hard. No grammar flaws I noticed, no spelling errors I saw, so this crit will be shorter than my normal ones - and purely pleasant.
I normally don't read anything but Original Fics, and even then I tend to prefer scifi/fantasy/horror - but I just had to read this... and I rather loved it!