Review for But It's Better if You Do

But It's Better if You Do

(#) XxPerfectTomorrowxX 2012-07-23

Death?!?
He's DEAD!

... Yes, continue! How could you not? I would be heartbroken. You know the pain of heartbreak, it's not good. I'm not ready for that in the writing world!

More? Soon-ish?

... and she straddled him, haha. I laughed. It felt good.

Author's response

Hah... glad I could finally throw you guys a curve ball! I keep feeling that everyone's figuring out this story too fast so I knew I'd have to throw a wrench into it.

I might, it's gonna be a really complicated final installment and it'd be darker as well. It would be based off of "A Little Less Sixteen Candles" video so there'd be some serious time jumping.

But I almost feel like it'd be nice to end with this story as well.

Oh well we shall see.

Yes! I'm hoping the next chapter will get written faster now that I got past this one (it was so hard to get it out).

And yes, she straddled him. I may or may not live out certain fantasies through my characters. >.>