Review for Harry Potter and the Touch of Destiny
This Gus, character should be good for Harry. Make him finally grow up, to be a man, instead of a baby. developing his mental core, will also help the way he processes things and the decisions he makes. This should be very interesting.... look forward to seeing more. update soon. congrats again.
Harry needed a mentor in my story, but too often I've seen authors use a perfect, all-powerful mentor for him. So, in order to be unique I created Gus. A grizzled former drug addict, with only one year of magical education. I hope he will make for an interesting change of pace from the norm. Thanks again for your review.
Harry's world ends as everyone he loves is killed when the Death Eaters attack Bill and Fleur's wedd...
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Just read. Another tiny oneshot FLUFF! This time its Sabriel
Just a tiny college oneshot very short and very FLUFFY!
What the title says, yo. :P