This is where I drop down on one knee and confess my undying love for you. This story is seriously one of three reasons that I even bother to check this site, anymore, and you definitely don't disappoint. Your writing is just so fluid and alive! It's so easy to read that it's almost like breathing, and your choice of words help paint the perfect picture in my mind. You are simply amazing at capturing fear, and you turn it into this pulsing thing that I can almost feel taking route in my chest. This story could very well be published, and I fully believe that it could one day be a best seller. Your talent is a gift, and I am so thankful that you've decided to post your work for us to see. It's been so long since I've actually been able to lose myself in a story, and you just make it so easy to slip into Frank's mind and see the world you've built around him. This is simply wonderful, and I am so excited to see where you take this.
~ Haili
Author's response
Ahhh. Why are your reviews always so lovely?! Not that I'm complaining xD I'm so pleased you feel that way about the story- and what you've said...God, it just means a whole lot to hear, thank you very, very muchly :'D