Review for Under City Lights

Under City Lights

(#) ReddyDevil 2012-07-30

A CLIFF HANGER! WHAT ARE YOU TRYIN TO DO TO ME, WOMAN?! -.- I was so sure that I would finally find out what Alex's deal was, and what Brendon's little secret was. That being said, I'm not at all disappointed by this chapter.

I like the fact that Brendon changed his room just for Juliet; I thought that was sweet. But something is nagging at my mind, especially with the whole wanting-sex thing. And the whole 'Brendon has a naughty secret' thing, too. Though it might not be that type of naughty, if you know what I mean. ;) Anyway, I still don't trust him at all.

I am very interested to revisit Ryan and Jon's little relationship and find out what the hell their deal is, and Spencer? Well, let's just say that I wouldn't object to him waking me up to get ready for school at all. ;) Of course, I'd probably lose my cool and go all fangirly and shy and not say anything, but eh. It's Spencer fucking Smith we're talking about here; I think everyone would kinda lose their cool!

As always, I'm left eagerly awaiting the next epic installment. Watch out for MTYK on Wednesday! :)

Author's response

I'm more worried about the next chapter, because I don't think I've written it as well as I wanted to... but it was all I could come up with. I couldn't write it right, you know? But I'm glad this one spiked your interest! ;) Have to cliffhang now and again!

I like that you don't trust him still, that's good. Don't give in to the momentary sweetness, haha, though that's kind of good to do too.

I had to make that soo awkward! It was fun. ;P I would lose my complete cool and probably just drool and stare. Not gonna lie, that dude is HOT!
There will be more with Jon and Ryan, pretty soon... if not the next update then the one after. Probably the one after.

I LOVED IT! ... but I so want more. I'm still bitter about waiting, lol. I'm impatient, and that update was SO good... and just so... leading on. I need to know what happens!