Review for Our Lips Touch
(#) imakilljoywannabe 2012-07-31 08:35:46 PM
I feel I might stuff it up if I start writing two personalities. But then if I did change prospective then things might be clearer to understand the situation. But then again suspense keeps the reader on their toes and hungry for more, plus they can identify themselves the main character (Frank) because of the uncertainty of the other person :)
dose that make sense, or am I just talking shit?
Lol oh well anyway…
Keep commenting on my chapters and let me know if I need to start doing Gerard’s Prospective if it’s not making sense or something like that. Thanks for commenting.
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This is just a simple love story between Frank and Gerard. Don't like? Don't read. -_-
The bad thoughts I have when I'm alone (almost always)
This also sucks, but I feel like it started decently.
Not really sure what this is.Had a good idea and took it somewhere crazy.Sorry