Review for I Shouldnt Love You

I Shouldnt Love You

(#) CatscanFlyy 2012-08-04 02:02:10 PM

Okay baby Frankie isn't so much of a baby anymore so that's good but Gerard is still in my bad books because how could anyone hurt that little face?

It's strange cause normally whatever his downfall I love Gerard as like a villain but he really gives me the creeps in this so I can't wait to see how it progresses into a Frerard.

I really enjoyed this chapter anyhow the only thing that bothered me again was the way the dialog was set out. Normally it's a new paragraph for a new speaker but like I had problems with that when I first started on Ficwad so don't worry about it too much.

Great chapter- I'm really exited about this story!

Author's response

I think I know what you mean by the dialog bit... Thats what my english teacher has to constantly try and explain to me :')

Thanks for reviewing :3

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