Review for I Shouldnt Love You
(#) CatscanFlyy 2012-08-04 02:02:10 PM
It's strange cause normally whatever his downfall I love Gerard as like a villain but he really gives me the creeps in this so I can't wait to see how it progresses into a Frerard.
I really enjoyed this chapter anyhow the only thing that bothered me again was the way the dialog was set out. Normally it's a new paragraph for a new speaker but like I had problems with that when I first started on Ficwad so don't worry about it too much.
Great chapter- I'm really exited about this story!
Thanks for reviewing :3
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