Review for Don't Be A Drag, Just Be A Queen
(#) PretzelMonster 2012-08-07 09:13:18 PM
Good so far. :) But one thing I did notice was that the sentence 'How cliché’, he thinks, he’s going to a gay bar dressed as a woman to impress a straight man whom he knows will never be his.' isn't a cliche, it's actually irony. But I only noticed that 'cause I'm a freak when it comes to language techniques. Sorry. I do like it! :D
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