Review for Wrong Number

Wrong Number

(#) ReddyDevil 2012-08-09

Wow, umm... Snooping much, Brendon?

Argh, I'm so curious as to what happened with Jon's father. And why is Jon scared he'll turn out the same? Is it like, some hereditary bi-polar disease or something?? Gah, the suspense is killing me, but then you're like, the Queen of cliff hangers of something, I swear.

I really love where this story is going, and this is one of the stories where I don't mind how fast the couple is going because it just fits so perfectly with the rest of the plot. I love Jon and Christian's understand of each other; absolutely brilliant.

Love it, like usual. :D

Author's response

It's totally how I imagine him in this story since he's so horribly hyper and in need of constant entertainment- and so innocent all at the same time!

Hahaha, I promise I don't try for them... They just work so perfectly at the end and I just can't help myself. :P

Aw, thanks! I really had trouble slowing them down because of the whole them living together- and her being in such a vulnerable position type of thing. I just figured speeding it up a little, and him wanting so badly to be her hero, would make things work out better.

:D I always love reading your reviews. They really do make me feel better about my writing lol.