Review for Our Lips Touch
Our Lips Touch
(#) RockMusic 2012-08-12 01:23:31 AM
Yeah yeah yeah, we love you too. Yay Frankie lives. But I swear he keeps insisting he's fun-sized, but he's still just short. It's adorable though. That bus driver amuses me.
I find it interesting how the part about hight bothered Frank and not the part about the bus driver only worrying about paperwork and having to clean the bus of Frankie guts. I would've been like.... Okay, I would've obsessed over the height thing too (even though I'm not short).
Great chapter, even though it was a filler. God it took them forever to get to school though. Haha.. Jk I don't mind. Oh and you aren't a fucker, you just fuck with people. Making you are a part time fucker :) which means you're only evil part time. That's perfectly fine, that's actually great. I'm full time evil.. So I'm very busy. Got babies to steal candy from and shit. Oh yeah.
I find it interesting how the part about hight bothered Frank and not the part about the bus driver only worrying about paperwork and having to clean the bus of Frankie guts. I would've been like.... Okay, I would've obsessed over the height thing too (even though I'm not short).
Great chapter, even though it was a filler. God it took them forever to get to school though. Haha.. Jk I don't mind. Oh and you aren't a fucker, you just fuck with people. Making you are a part time fucker :) which means you're only evil part time. That's perfectly fine, that's actually great. I'm full time evil.. So I'm very busy. Got babies to steal candy from and shit. Oh yeah.
Author's response
Thank you, I was writing this chapter and I was thinking to myself 'ok by the end of this chapter they are going to be at school' :) I didn't leave my laptop till they made it.
HeeHeeHee i can handel been a part time fucker.
Have fun stealing the candy.
thank you again for the comment.
HeeHeeHee i can handel been a part time fucker.
Have fun stealing the candy.
thank you again for the comment.
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