Review for Our Lips Touch
Our Lips Touch
(#) gerardways_coffee 2012-08-12 11:57:46 AM
Great chapter as always!:) can't wait to see what Gerard and Frank have to 'discuss' later;) hehe and I noticed one minor spelling mistake,in the 2 paragraph,2nd line -“Did you just fucking kiss my brother?” he didn’t sound too impress as he and Ray...' you wrote impress instead of impressed.. But apart from that it was great ! :) update soon,much love,SianXo
Author's response
I can't wait to see what Gee and Frank are going to do too... and I'm the one writing it.:)
thankyou very much for leting me know about that mistake, Ive gone and fixed it now:)
I'll try and updat soon, thank you for the review.
thankyou very much for leting me know about that mistake, Ive gone and fixed it now:)
I'll try and updat soon, thank you for the review.
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