this is incredibly emotional! i really think you should take the father rape part out though i found it really disturbing but other than that i found it amazing and i literally read every single chapter in one night i couldnt stop :) ive only just finished at 3:30am and i started reading at 10:45pm haha I've never cried at a story so much in my entire life! absolutely devastate about frankie and gee though hope they get back together in the end :)
Author's response
Thank you for reviewing. I'm sorry you found the rape scene distrubing but I think that was the emotion I was trying to acheive through it. I hope that hasn't tainted your view on this too much though :)