Review for Frerard smut.

Frerard smut.

(#) EffigyQueen 2012-08-18

Capital letters and some punctuation wouldn't hurt, besides it's more pleasurable to read.
Except for that, quite okay. Keep going.

Author's response

Thanks for being honest :)
And I know, but I write it in notepad because I don't have Microsoft or what have you, so there's no auto correct, but i'll look more into it next time :)