Review for Personalized stories

Personalized stories

(#) tmbfucks 2012-08-22

Name: Penina Dayne
Age: 15
~LOOKS~
Hair: Long, straight, chestnut brown with a full fringe
Eyes: Green
Height/Weight/Body type: 5'3, I don't know how much I weigh, and I'm curvy I think
Clothing: Short sleeved t-shirt with a picture or pattern on it, black leggings and black boots
Piercings/Tattoos: None
Personality: Bubbly, witty, clever, friendly, funny, loyal, can get really angry at times
Likes/Dislikes: I like the Internet and music and I love Frank, I dislike spiders and insects and mean people
Story line: I try to run away from my adopted family, the Way's, after they make me cry, but Frank finds me and convinces me to come back inside by kissing me. I escape the house by climbing out the window. Oh, and I'm originally from England.
Characters you want included and as what: The Way's as my brothers who got on my nerves, Ray and maybe Bob as the friends that are trying to stop the argument, and Frank as my eventual boyfriend. XD xx

Author's response

So your adopted family is the Way's, and you're originally from England.. If I need to write a bit of backstory, can I make your life in England a bit bad? Like the reason being because of unfit parents or something?