First of all, stop doubting yourself, please. You are my favorite author on this website (or for fanfiction in general) and your writing in terms of grammar and continuity is superb. Second, this story is perfection. I swear to God, if you discontinue this story I might have to come and find you O.o But seriously, this makes so much sense. And it has everything. It has funny parts, and Ray Toro, and a bitchy girlfriend, and a sexy boyfriend/friend, and a crazy Gerard, and annoying parents, and a rebellious Frank. The way that Frank feels is über relatable, to the point of being a bit scary, and so pleasant to read. And just your inclusion of poetry and lyrics and Gerard's insane blurbs make everything so much more memorable than it would be even on its own. And I'm not just saying that.
But thirdly, and most importantly, if you really are having a hard time with personal things in the real world, pleasepleaseplease don't put those off for this unless you want to. Don't think that everyone will turn against you of you take some time off. People genuinely like your writing. That doesn't go away. Don't stress yourself out over this. You are more important. So thank you for putting this up and for writing it and for being lovely and perfect.