Review for Under City Lights

Under City Lights

(#) ReddyDevil 2012-09-01 12:01:07 AM

Um... blinks Wow.

HOLY SHIT! What is that, 'Spelsea'?! 'Chelcer'?! Please say they aren't getting together, because I hate that bitch, and please say that they aren't planning something because I love Spencer too much to have him break my heart. :(

Um, you changed the spelling of Juliet's name in this one to Juliette. I know you've probably had a lot on your mind, but I just thought if point that out. But still! Maybe by TALKING and not doing SEXUAL THINGS (here's hoping your fictional Brendon-the-Ass will read this! XD Ahh, I'm strange :P) their relationship will move forward, which I think is what they both want. Ah well. We'll see what happens at Brendon's house next chapter, right? Right? hopefully smile

I liked how she and Ryan seemed to bond at his house. And HE LIKES JON?! I mean, wow, who wouldn't - Jon's awesome (I can't believe I just wrote 'Joan'! facepalm) - but... I've never read a Ryan/Jon story before... A Ryjo? (Wow, that's actually what my friend said she'd nickname me if I was a guy 0.0) Jonry?! Jory? Eww, no, that reminds me of a guy I used to know. Yuck. Anyway, my point is that this should be interesting.

Sorry it took me so long to read this. :(

Author's response

Haha, I'll try to get more out soon as an explanation so you can see whether to be disappointed or annoyed, or whatever else.

Thanks! I completely missed it. I think I fixed it. I'll read through again later. I just quickly tried to fix it.

Honestly I like Jonry- it makes me think of awry. Their romance went awry.

It's okay! Glad to hear from you though.

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