Review for Forever Yours

Forever Yours

(#) japulapu 2012-09-05 02:47:42 AM

Cliffhanger! Interesting chapter. It was also quite humorous and you can clearly see that the two are getting really attached to each other. As usual, no grammatic errors and overall it was a really exciting chapter.

Author's response

:P Thank you. I hope the next one doesn't come up short. I cut it short because I'm not too great at writing action. I'm new to it completely.
Thanks for the review, as always it was very complimentary.

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