This, my friend, is absolutely stunning. A masterpiece made of words, if you will. I really love Gerbert and I don't think it gets nearly enough love, so to find that you've written one has just about made my day.
The way you captured everything little thing about Bert without making it seem boring is a real show of honest skill and talent. Everything about it just drew me in; first it was the title (which really caught my attention in a big way) and from there on through it I was hooked. I loved the way you made Bert's character contradict in so many ways, yet it seemed so real and perfect. The way you wrote made it breathtakingly clear just how much Gerard loves him.
Fantastic, fantastic work and I hope to see more Gerbert from you soon! :D
Author's response
Oh my god, this review made my night. I'm so happy you liked it, and I'm so thrilled you thought I captured Bert, 'cause I was a little uncertain, never having written him before.
I have actually started work on a short chaptered Gerbert, so that should appear in a couple weeks or so...
Thank you so much again! :'D