Wow. That stuff at the end.... that was powerful.
I'm gonna compare your story to alcohol for a moment.
Other writers that I like, normally they write long chapters, very descriptive and deep and emotional, that take a while to read and enjoy, like fine wine.
Your story is just like theirs- descriptive and deep and emotional, but in this short power update. Like a shot of really nice vodka.
In other words, I love this. Please don't hate me forever.
Author's response
How could I hate you forever? I love you forever! This is one of the nicest things anyone has ever said to me :3