Review for Homeless

Homeless

(#) FrankAIero 2012-09-16 05:00:04 AM

I like I love. Yummz. Dis story is da shit, Futha Mucka. Tho der wuz da one pace were u had said 'woulf' nd meant 'would' nd u said ' “Take care!” Gerard watched Frank walk off, and then opened the door to his grandparent’s house. ' when Frank wasn't in da scene son. Lolz.

Did I type that? Ohhh possession. Ghetto possesion.

Author's response

oh i'm sorry about that, i changed the scene a little, and i didn't proofread enough. Thank you!

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