Review for Forever Yours
Ah, yes. There is a lot of repetition. Mostly I just try to do that from Madeline's perspective though to kind of show her reluctance to accept anything.
It is all about reinforcement. Things are going to change quickly though, I promise it won't be so boring all through the story. :P
Really? That's cool. I love writing him because he can just be completely straight forward, but at the same time he's not all that bad. He does have emotion, it's just limited in how he shows it.
Thanks! I always enjoy your reviews. I like to think it helps me make the story better, to know what's good and what's kind of lame. So thanks!
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