FicWad: fresh-picked original and fan fiction

This was really cool. I like comparing your different poems with eachother, and this one is different than how you usually write. It's probably because you wrote it a while ago, but the whole atmosphere is much simpler and the language doesn't carry the same imagery. I still really like it, though, because the theme doesn't really call for too much visual and I liked the structure for this. Another part that I liked was that you didn't call it "bullying" in the content, but it was clearly alluded to. I think that made a difference because, at least to me, things like that don't always fall under a title and I liked it because the narrator seemed almost apologetic, and that's how I feel when I let my emotions get the better of me and turn me into a complete jerkwad. I really enjoyed reading this, so thank you for posting.