I seem to be a little confused. Maybe I was trying to read too fast. But I was definitely absorbed in it, and I will reread after I post this. Not as intense as others, but it was ok.
Author's response
what were you confused about? i did kind of jump from the hospital scene to about a month later. I did that because no one really wants to read about a completely comatose Belle. Well, I know I’m sick of reading about a comatose Belle. Anyway, if you re-read this, post what confused you so I can change it. thanks
yea, i think the melodrama was lost on this chapter. it gets a little exhausting to write with excitement all of the time.