Review for Our Lips Touch

Our Lips Touch

(#) LadyNinja 2012-09-25 07:23:24 PM

OOOOOH bulletproof ninja I AM A NINJA
Okay okay on an unrelated note
Instead of gasps you said gaps
Also
GOOD STORY

Author's response

yay thank you for that, i've fixed it now :)


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