I love the way you described the hospital scene. I could vividly picture it all! Great work as always! Can't wait to see what happens next! I'm hoping to post on my story tonight!
Author's response
i was listening to "camisado" on repeat while i wrote this chapter, so send all thanks to the attention of ryan ross for being such an amazing lyricist.
i go over everything that i write in my mind, like a movie. my imagination is kind of terrifying, actually. but that's the reason it comes out so descriptive.
ahh! i need to go check you your story. maybe i'll be lucky enough to get first review this time. evie always beats me to it :( …oh, and thanks for the continued support. It really means a lot to me