That was like sugar in story-form! :'D I really enjoyed reading it- Short, sweet and such a simple concept that really worked for the song. Your writing style is well-developed too and really made it work. Great stuff. Thank you very much for posting this, I greatly enjoyed reading it...Hope to read more of your work for this in the future!
Oh that's just the cutest little metaphor(simile? Shit. I dunno.) Eh, 'sugar in story-form' is just cute. :D
Really, you should be getting the credit for this even exsisting! You started M&W which inspired it. :3
I'll definately be doing the next song. Thanks! c: