Review for Purgatory

Purgatory

(#) SyraStrange 2012-10-07 05:35:05 PM

He didn’t mean to, right? Of course he didn’t, he would never do that. After all, he is my boyfriend. And boyfriends don’t do that; everyone knows that.

NO FRANK I DON’T CARE ANYONE CAN HURT ANYONE. BOYFRIENDS ESSPECIALLY. I mean, this is just… gah. If you let someone in, if you let someone so close to you, it’s like you’re playing with fucking fire, if you’re careful, it won’t hurt you, but if you slip up, SHIT MAN YOU’RE ON FIRE.

(here we go, Syra trying to make a point all special and moving and FAILING spectactularly)

AND:

I remember he whispered to me that he’ll always love me no matter what, and I almost said it back.

D’: MY FEELINGS.
Man, you’d best update this. It would literally HELP MY HEALTH AHKADBJJBADSIHYSAKLADJ.

p.s. – Can you believe I didn’t know how to do the italics and bold thingy until now? Wow, I’m actually way stupider than people think, AND THAT’S SAYING SOMETHING.

p.p.s. – OK TAKE ME OUT JUST CAME ON SO I FEEL SO HAPPY RIGHT NOW

p.p.p.s. – oh my god, shut up Syra, water you doin. STOP.

-Syra

Author's response

Jeeze, Frank is sensitive right now, buddy. Deep stuff there, but...Frankie. :3 (You did NOT fail. Okay? Okay.)

I'M SORRY. I DIDN'T KNOW IT WOULD MAKE YOU FEELS.
I really wish I could but school is just ugh. I REALLY WANNA HELP WITH YOUR HEALTH.

p.s- Aww, Sweets, it took me a while to figure it out too. YOU'RE NOT ALONE.

p.p.s- BY FRANZ FERDINAND? I KNOW DAT SONG.

p.p.p.s- NO SYRA. DON'T STOP. (and that sounds kinda wrong xD)

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