Review for Our Lips Touch
(#) SeeYouInHellKid 2012-10-13 10:51:46 PM
ANYWAY!! I'll admit, this chapter does sound like a filler. I'm quite surprised how Cassie reacts cause when people are all affectionate i look curiously(like a creeper), register what's going on, apolgize for staring then leave them be.
You'd think after 15 years of exsistance i'd get use to seeing that but it's still somethin different i can't quite understand O-o
GAH!!! Rantings!! sorry, can't wait to see what's in stored for this story, Ferard, Cassie, Eric, blah, blah...
I had a strobe light in my room and i turned the stereo all the way up (my chem playing). I was jumping around, head banging and screaming out every line that I knew.
I ended up giving myself whiplash, hurt my throat and my heart was beating so hard I thought that maybe I was dying.
After I'd gone through two albums I collapsed on the ground, panting, sweating and shaking. My back against my door and just sat there trying to breath normal again. It was crazy and so much fucking fun XD
I couldn't move my neck properly for about a week and my voice sounded funny for a few days but it was totally worth it. One man mosh pits are the best, so much fun. (Yes I am a crazy little fucker) XD
I plain to get every single My chem related album I can get my hands on. I could just watch them all day (I never loved a band as much as My Chem.)
the reason why this chapter sounded like a filler was because it was! I have such big plains for this story but I'm just having some trouble reaching the point of action.
Cassie was just acting causally she's one of those people that don't really care what you do. she wasn't staring and she wasn't avoiding eye contact. (dose that make sense? I don't think it did but oh well.)
oh so much stuff is gonna happen but as i said it's a bit difficult for me at the moment to actually reach to point of action, I have to set things up so then it all makes sense at the end...XD if i keep going with the current idea I have now, there is going to a shocking surprise, but that won't be until far down the track XD
If it starts to get too boring or it sounds like shit let me know early so I can maybe go back and edit/rewrite it. just don't give up on me because I know I can write a great story and I really want you guys to enjoy it!
ANYWAY...Thank you for the comment.
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