Review for Under City Lights

Under City Lights

(#) Mirazal 2012-10-23

Oh my god.
This is really intense.
(I got so used to your sweet fluffy stories and then this came back and punched me in the face.)

This was a good chapter. Somewhat filler, but really good. I agree with Ryan, Juliet is a little heartless, but I realize that some people just are, and they're gonna react how Juliet did, and I REALIZED that her character is pretty much spot on and perfect and SHE CAN ONLY GET BETTER. (That was confusing.)

Aarggggh the cancer. :'(

Okay, I love Spencer, but right now I can choke him.
So.... please update soon! Please!

Author's response

(Ouch!)

She's more technical than emotional. :) Or that's what I'm trying for. Aw, thank you!

=/ Yeah.

Haha poor Spence.

I'll try. :D Thank you!