Review for Our Lips Touch

Our Lips Touch

(#) MidnightBlues 2012-10-30 02:55:48 PM

I LOVE IT!!!!! I know I am a bit late with this review, but my friend recommended it to me a few weeks ago but I was reading a fanfiction by Bulletproof Ninja (brilliant auther) so I needed to finish that first. There is one thing though, can I just point out that you spelt Coma wrong, you spelt it Comer. Sorry.

~Midnight Blues.

Author's response

Yay i'm glad you like it. Yes you can point that out XD now i can go fix it, thank you for letting me know and thank you for commenting XD

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