Great Story, however you should have stayed vague about how much money Harry has in Chapter 5, because now in chapter 10 you mention he's going to give half of his fortune as a foundation to the school. and then mention that he can't afford a library. it just doesn't add up. with what you stated as Harry's wealth in chapter 5, with half that annual income he should be able to pay a staff of 60 the wizarding eqivalent of a six figure income, pay for all food and give 1000 children 100 galleons each for their supplies and still only use a quarter of his annual income.
Author's response
Affording a library is easy. Building a real library with depth is difficult. Even today, most American colleges have totally failed to do so.
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