OK. This is a great story, however I feel that these next few chapters are going to be make it or break it for this story. In my not experienced authors mind I feel that a good direction to go would be a magically constructed body for Peurter to inhabit, utilizing some form of anchor to keep the construct stable. Like a ring, pendent, or even a gem embedded in his chest, like a heart. Like I said I'm not an experienced author, but I have seen a few stories were something similar to this happens, and the story will forever on the brink of being horrendous. Darth Kobra.
Author's response
Thanks for your review. A new chapter has been posted.