I like.
I get sort of a religious attitude out of this one.
"It's not real until you see it"
I don't know, it just gives me the feeling that there isn't really an acceptance that the universe came from nothing, you know?
I personally don't think it did. Maybe that's why I see that in this poem.
Well, it's good to see more work from you.
-Adnarim Smada
P.S: I really think this would be another good one for Poetry to Stories if you'd allow it a second time.
Author's response
I never really thought of it that way, since I'm not religious, but it's nice to see there are more sides to it than the one I see :)
So, thank you, and yes, feel free to feature it if you'd like to :)