Review for The planemo and its moon

The planemo and its moon

(#) AdnarimSmada 2012-11-18 04:33:24 PM

I like.

I get sort of a religious attitude out of this one.

"It's not real until you see it"

I don't know, it just gives me the feeling that there isn't really an acceptance that the universe came from nothing, you know?

I personally don't think it did. Maybe that's why I see that in this poem.

Well, it's good to see more work from you.

-Adnarim Smada

P.S: I really think this would be another good one for Poetry to Stories if you'd allow it a second time.

Author's response

I never really thought of it that way, since I'm not religious, but it's nice to see there are more sides to it than the one I see :)

So, thank you, and yes, feel free to feature it if you'd like to :)

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