It´s shitty. NOT! ;) I liked the flashback scene. Well, not the actual scene but you know... la-di-dah. ;) This is goodness packed in fanfic!
Author's response
yeah, i'm not too good at writing all the naughty stuff. but i was trying to get across how much of an ass her ex was. glad u liked...i appreciate it so much and u already know how u rock my friggin socks completely off. :)