Review for Give It Your Best Shot
Give It Your Best Shot
(#) BJH 2012-11-26 05:48:05 AM
A really nice chapter. I liked how Porteur listened, not only to Harry, but also to Sirius and James. Their, Sirius and James, ability to see beyond their worry for Harry and embrace Porteur as a son they just hadn't had the chance to know and love yet was impressively done. Sensitive without getting maudlin. I expect that Lily will have a more demonstrative reaction when she is given the journal to read. Will the men try to decide that she doesn't need to know about the parallel world?
BJH
BJH
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I'm glad that you like the chapter and didn't find it angsty. That is what I was aiming for, so it pleases me to know that I've succeeded. As for Lily's reaction, you'll have to wait and see.
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