I feel like the quality of your writing has been getting better as the story progresses. :) That's good! You're improving as an author.
This was an interesting chapter, and I really liked it! Mr. Heaney seems cool.
Please update again soon! This was awesome. :)
Thank you! :D
And yeah, Mr Heaney was based on a teacher in my last high school. He was awesome and stuff XD
And sure, I'll try and update soon :)