Review for Give It Your Best Shot

Give It Your Best Shot

(#) mrpietan 2012-12-01 12:22:59 PM

hmm, only a small nit... the merge, I would have liked to "see" a bit more, but over all, chuckle, keeping it like it is adds a bit of mystery to it. Although, I think you might want to have Harry (when he has time) go through his memories and getting them sorted out.... he might want to throw out the "unusable" stuff....

I look forward to reading the next chapter.

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Thanks for the review. New chapter up.

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