Review for The Black Parade

The Black Parade

(#) MidnightBlues 2012-12-04

LOVE IT!!!

Two things though:

1. What was Frankie's freak accident?

And 2. PLEASE make your chapters longer!!! They are sooo good but they are too short!! You need to put more infomation into them to make them even better!!!!!!!

Author's response

in this story,frank worked on a movie set.one day,one of the stage lights fell on him and you get the rest...


don't worry,the next chapter will describe the I Don't Love you music video.I will make it nice and long.