Kwan's a genius.
I like the complexities of Harry's relationship with Karina, even if it'll probably end up a trainwreck. It's just plain interesting to hear about. We'll have to see what part Paulo plays in the future; he seems important.
The fight was also quite good, as was the idea for allowing a goblin to cast spells. Very unique. But then again, so is this entire story.
Can't wait for more.
Author's response
Kwan's just frightening, even to write. The trainwreck is coming. All the pieces are nearly in place.
Thanks for the review. I am still looking forward to more chapters of your stories. Hope to see some soon!~Jim