Review for I Hear You've Been Bleeding

I Hear You've Been Bleeding

(#) Mirazal 2012-12-07 09:09:59 PM

Well... that went in a new direction...
It was really intense and unexpected, but interesting. I liked it.
I think Isabelle was overreacting at Anthony, and he had a point about the complaining and stuff. But I guess Isabelle is likw the flawed female hero, so that's okay.

This was great, please update soon. :)

Author's response

Thank you :)
And yeah, I thought Isabelle seemed to be too much of a Mary Sue, and everybody hates a Mary Sue. She just seemed to be too needy, and she didn't have any flaws. Flaws make people, so I had to get a flaw into her as soon as possible.
Thank you :)

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