Review for Loser

Loser

(#) Forge 2006-03-13 11:27:13 PM

My ROFLcopter never landed, and my LMAOntain bike saw constant movement. It is quiet safe to say I LOLed.

Now, seriously. Excellent story. The "Matt does not/thinks/uses" one-clause sentences fit the atmosphere of this story perfectly. I also like how it seemed very realistic, with situations that happen to most of us.

I don't play Doom, but I'm hooked on Counter-Strike. Uh-oh.



Author\'s Response: I think you're okay, Forge. The reason why Matt (and the other losers at his office) accepts his label is because he gives up after one feeble attempt to escape loserdom.

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