Review for Loser
Loser
(#) Forge 2006-03-13 11:27:13 PM
My ROFLcopter never landed, and my LMAOntain bike saw constant movement. It is quiet safe to say I LOLed.
Now, seriously. Excellent story. The "Matt does not/thinks/uses" one-clause sentences fit the atmosphere of this story perfectly. I also like how it seemed very realistic, with situations that happen to most of us.
I don't play Doom, but I'm hooked on Counter-Strike. Uh-oh.
Author\'s Response: I think you're okay, Forge. The reason why Matt (and the other losers at his office) accepts his label is because he gives up after one feeble attempt to escape loserdom.
Now, seriously. Excellent story. The "Matt does not/thinks/uses" one-clause sentences fit the atmosphere of this story perfectly. I also like how it seemed very realistic, with situations that happen to most of us.
I don't play Doom, but I'm hooked on Counter-Strike. Uh-oh.
Author\'s Response: I think you're okay, Forge. The reason why Matt (and the other losers at his office) accepts his label is because he gives up after one feeble attempt to escape loserdom.
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