Review for Steel, Soul, and Spirit
I tried to read your story, just because the premise looked interesting. However, the formatting is in grave need of repair. The paragraphs need a break, or indentation. Either would work. As it is, it is too difficult to read where some of them end and the next one begins. I will check it out again, if you decide to change it.
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Post Hogwarts,AU, Voldemort is gone and Harry is free to live his live as he sees fit or is he
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