Review for Things Happen Sometimes

Things Happen Sometimes

(#) BrutalCrayon 2012-12-11 05:29:56 PM

Sorry I haven't reviewed in forever :( I got lazy and haven't been reading everyday, but I loved this chapter! Waiting for this to happen! Every love story is better with sex! But my suggestion would be to take out all the unnecessary scenes where edith or Harry have dance lessons, they're dragged on to long with unecesaary dialogue and they get boring. But other than that it was good!

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