Review for Do you want a Christmas one-shot?:)

Do you want a Christmas one-shot?:)

(#) atomickilljoy 2012-12-16

Name: Jennifer Flores

Nickname: Jen

Age: 25

Looks:
Hair- black, wavy, shoulder length, sideswept bangs
Eyes- brown, with black rimmed glasses
Skin- light brown

Likes: comics, action figures, Bob, drawing, reading, writing, and singing.

Dislikes: dresses, clowns, getting yelled at, and the dark.

Plot: Bob and Jen love everything about each other, despite them being a few years apart and Bob and Jen being famous(drummer and singer).They couldn't love each other more. When Jen realizes that she's pregnant two weeks before Christmas, she and Bob couldn't be happier. Jen realizes that it's time to introduce Bob to her family(three brothers and mom), to her dread. Her mom invites her to spend the holidays with them, especially since she wants to meet Bob. They go, and her brothers immediately hate Bob. The fact that he got her pregnant doesn't help. They go all protective over Jen. Her mom still has to make her decision. Funniness ensues, at the end, her mom likes Bob and the brothers just have to deal.

Ten Facts About Yourself:

1. She's a lead singer in a band.
2. The band is her and her friends, Patrick, John, Gunner, and Greg.
3. Her and her family is Mexican American.
4. She's working on a comic.
5. She's a big nerd
6. Her brothers see her as a little brother, since she is boyish like them.
7. Her father left them when she was 5 and her brothers were 8,11, and 13.
8. She hates dresses.
9. She and Bob met when she was still working in a comic book store and she was 19 and he was 24.
10. She only can sing.

Author's response

Just wanted to let you know that I can totally write this with no problems :3

Love Hozzie
xoxo