I forgot to read the summary at the top haha :'D Oh. MYGOSH. That was so hot. I could just see it in my mind haha and loved the whole thing. It might be easier for me if you spaced the sentences apart but other than that it was really good. You should make a sequel. :3
xx Mia
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I may just do that!! A sequal sounds like a plan :) Thank you xo