YEAH! The new LOVELA story! And I´m the very first one to review. covers up Evie´s posts with her hands on the computer screen The VERY FIRST, I say! glares
Ok, so the Grand-dame of Drama has returned with another piece of fiction that puts others to shame. Let me just point out a few things that should be mentioned (i.e. that you should be praised for):
1) the seeding of the story (especially the opening paragraphs) -> We´re curious, we´re dying to know, you got us hooked.
2) shedding light on the inner life of the characters -> We empathize and take your characters for real people with real lifes, thus real problems.
3) calling Patrick a push-over. -> We like to laugh. ;)
4) referring to a thesaurus in your summary. -> If you were to took up "addictive FOB fanfiction that is gripping beyond reasonable limits" you´d find a picture of LOVELA.
You are the pioneer of the Division of Joy´s work so go ahead and lead the way, C. :)
Author's response
Thank you so so so much for this review. I was talking to Crystal last night about my anxieties about posting a new story due to the fact that I wasn't sure if it would live up to I Remember. I definitely feel more confident about this story now. You are a great ego booster!
PS: Grand-dame of Drama...I like it :)