Review for The Lemon Games

The Lemon Games

(#) TheMasterBraeden 2013-01-02

So far so good. Though it feels like the story is flowing a bit fast. I mean I know the story is one that is essentially smut with a simple plot. But you almost never see or hear about Naruto training. And except for the invasion during the Chunnin Exams and the finals of the Chunnin Exam there never is any fight scenes. So that in my opinion would make the story better, I mean he has gained all of these abilities and you rarely see him using any of them.

Though I do have a request and a question for the author. When you are increasing Naruto's skills and stats, would it be possible to show what he originally had and what it became? This way I do not have to switch back and forwards between chapters to figure out what he has. Now the question that I have for you is, you mentioned that certain characters would be brought back to life, would at some point we see either Kushina and, maybe, Mito Uzumaki?

Again, good story, though whether you make the changes or not. I will still be reading your story as I enjoyed reading it.

Master Braeden