Alright, to my defense I have to say that I had two options this morning before I had to leave for school:
1) read the new chapter
2) take a shower
UNFORTUNATELY I chose the second one. It probably made me smell a bit nicer but it sure as hell didn´t quite have the same humorous and stimulating (does that sound STRANGE to somebody else?) effect as this amazing chapter did.
Me loves because
a) it´s fucking hilarious (Pete and Patrick being silly, Joe being... Joe and Andy is in it too ;) ),
b) Wren and CoCo are hilarious too,
c) you have such a talent for thinking of little details to present picture-perfect scenes to us,
d) your choice of words and your syntax show that you don´t just type this up without thinking much (unlike this FrostedGlass person)... and if you do, then I would like to fix some tutoring lessons with you,
e) because I didn´t burn myself when reading this (goddamn shower).
On a further note: HA! I was still faster than Crystal. ;)
Author's response
I think choosing option 2 over option 1 was a good idea. Smelling is never a good thing.
I loves your reviews because you motivate me to continue to write. Thanks! And I'm glad that my story didn't burn you like your shower.